martes, 16 de marzo de 2010

The New Mysteries of Harris Burdick

The fifth level have finished their mysterious stories after working very hard. Here you can see the results. Enjoy reading the stories!

Congratulations, 5A, you are very creative!



Just Dessert
In the kitchen, there is a knife, a rolling pin, a girl and a pumpkin. Wendy has got dark short hair. She´s got a white t-shirt. There is an alien in the pumpkin. The alien is very shiny. Wendy wants to discover what´s in the pumpkin. Is there an alien in the pumpkin? Wendy cuts the pumpkin. The pumpkin opens and an alien goes out of the pumpkin. Wendy and the Alien are friends and they celebrate Halloween together.
--Diego, Mateo, Vanesa, and Juan José



The Seven Chairs
The church is in France. It is daytime. There is a ghost and a nun. This nun was a young, pretty girl who was burned and buried in the floor of the church because she is a girl. Fifty years later, she is alive again and she is a ghost. And she catches the monks, she brings the monks in the cupboard and she burns the monks. Her boyfriend kisses her and she returns being a nun!
--
Andrea, Alejandra, Magnia, and Asma.



Missing in Venice
Venice is a beautiful town. There is a steamship. There is a very dangerous captain, he is wearing black shoes, a blue t-shirt and a patterned cap. The captain is a jewel robber and in the steamship is a very, very rich family. The robber goes to the secret room to take the diamond. But the rich family calls the police. The police take the gun and the police shot the robber. The rich family lived happy. And the robber is dead.
--Claudia, Jin Lin, Robi, and Asddin.



Another Place, Another Time
The train is on the railway. On the sailing boat there are three boys and one girl. The first boy is wearing a cap. The second boy has got a backpack. The third boy has got dark hair. The first girl has got curly hair. The people go to the caste on a sail boat. The sail boat is in the sea. A haunted castle appears in the fog. To go to the castle and fall down in a trick. It all was a dream!

-- María, Ilham, Yaiza,


Under the Rug
In a house there is a living room with a cupboard. There is a man. He´s got glasses, he´s got black hair. There´s a cat under the rug. One man scared the cat. The man kills the cat with a chair. The cat meows and the man realizes the cat is under the rug. The man sells the cat because it is a problem.
--Sergio, Luis, Fátima, Ajmal, Ali and Dayana.



Archie Smith, Boy Wonder.
This is a bedroom, in a bedroom I can see a bed, a boy, a window, a boat and two lights. It is night. Archie Smith is aboy, he is sleeping. The kidnappers are strong men. They have a sack and a gun. There are two lights in the wall and a tiny voice asked, "Is he the one?" There are two kidnappers with torches and one of them said "Is he the one" because his is the kid of rich parents to kidnap. The kidnappers kidnap the kid and the parents pay a lot of money and the kidnappers release Archie.
--Sergio, Hugo, Daniel and Pérola.

3 comentarios:

  1. Dear 5thA students,

    We voted on the stories. We like the most Just Dessert with 16 votes because it´s original, and we like the alien. The alien is very cute!

    Goodbye!

    5th B students

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  2. Dear 5th B students,

    Thank you for your comments. We have got seven votes for Just Dessert!

    XOXO,
    bye bye,
    5th A students.

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  3. This is my favourite story,it is very interesting.

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